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Going Under

Time anesthetized absent
choice, guardian of self, removed
The seamless void revealed
by malevolent stares
from besmirchers
with death in their glances

Or isolated circumstances
A sole purpose of unencumbered
of unconnected

Similarities, fanciful memories
desperately placed
Fears of sulking rage, lust
murderous anger
ferocious hunger loose to rampage

Or surety of what?s unknown
having cut the beast
grinding incessant
to morph all that's sharp
into limp, quiet stubs

doubtless latent good would occur
but not enough to keep the good secure
©2005-2009 ~ACauseRemains
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Author's Comments

The title refers to the 'black out' one can experience when the mind snaps or when an operation is about to be performed...some people black out when they drink. It's happened to me twice: once when drunk and once when at the dentist. It's odd. Even in the deepest sleep I'm aware of time. Sometimes it's a little foggy but always there's an awareness of self.

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a good attempt to put words to such an event.

I believe my poem about a blackout would simply be this (see below)

















that's it (see above)

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Here's my whole life described in a sentence for you to judge in a second. :threaten:


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lol...Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Your fears are tools for manipulators. Take a little salt with the sauce. It'll make you smile. :) Peace.
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